Just like the last several weeks, Jenny has given us a challenge where we can't actually use a word in the writing, but must convey the word in our 100 word creation.
The word this week is:
TREASURE
I have chosen to continue my story. Funny, but I normally don’t care to read serial stories, and I didn’t intend to write one, but... sometimes the pen takes me into uncharted territory!
My first chapters were inspired by the words:
.... and so the story continues:
She marched resolutely from the auction building with single-minded purpose. The sock containing bills and coins bumped against her leg. Her precious cache she collected through the year: change from grocery purchases, loose coins found in the dryer, and the $20 bill she discovered in the pocket of her winter coat. She spotted the pony in a dusty corral amongst a small herd of decrepit, dejected souls. Her heart ached. She wanted to buy them all. A man wearing stained overalls stretching over his rotund abdomen advanced. She ignored his stench and announced, “I must buy that pony.”
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ooh good for her. I hope she gets him.
ReplyDeleteMe too! ;-)
DeleteI read the other bits as well. I'm glad you continued the story!
ReplyDeleteThanks. It will be fun to see what happens next week... whether I can force fit my story into Jenny's prompt!
Delete"Well you can't a tall gal named Willow somthin or nother jest bought er "
ReplyDeleteLike the Nike commercial... Just do it! Only this time... just buy it!
DeleteOMG, I didn't get a chance to read last week's but had to go. Breaks my heart. Hopefully, after this week she'll figure out a way to get that pony, ha!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by. Wouldn't this be heartbreaking if it were a real story? I am sure things like this have happened to folks out there.
DeleteOh yes, what a treasure it would be! Yes, yes!!
ReplyDeletea treasure indeed
ReplyDeleteThis is so neat.
ReplyDeleteI love your continued story.
You have such an evocative way of writing.