We have a different sort of challenge for today's writing:
Jenny posted, "Your writing challenge is to write a story in fives.
Five sentences consisted of five words EACH.
25 words."
25 words."
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Five sentences.
Five words in each sentence.
5 x 5 = 25
So, I poured my coffee.
I typed my first line.
It took off from there.
I will probably speak in 5-word sentences all day!
She sprinted to the barrel.
Her loose hair swept back.
The wind scrubbed her face.
She moved swift as lightning.
No filly could race faster!
Great action photo too! Your story in five is awesome and funny how once you get rolling in 5's they just keep coming!
ReplyDeleteA very succinct comment on a lively picture.
ReplyDeleteVery vivid imagery in your writing...excellent !
ReplyDeleteI love the line, 'The wind scrubbed her face'
Cool, I like the pic too:@)
ReplyDeleteSuch a pretty horse! Is that you doing the fine job of riding? I'd love to be doing that. :)
ReplyDeleteNice 5 X 5 poem too!
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I love these! You know I want to use them in my classroom!
ReplyDeleteHugs,
Courtney
You clever girl, you!
ReplyDeleteThat's a tough challenge, good job! I tagged you over on my blog:)
ReplyDeleteperfect combination of words and photos!
ReplyDeletesounds like a lesson plan
ReplyDeletebut i dont need one
i would just rather read
in an exclusive book club
the lost saints of tennessee
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(would hate to grade these;)
OOOOOOOooooo! I think I would like to do this. Boy, did you meet the challenge.
ReplyDeletegreat photo, and you really told a great little story!
ReplyDeleteI liked it!
ReplyDelete=)
Wow! Great take on the prompt! Love your photo, too!
ReplyDeleteFun! You did a great job. Going to give it a try - rats - 6 words... We'll stick with You did a great job :-D.
ReplyDeleteLove it! Your horses certainly have personality. Love their pics!~Ames
ReplyDeletethis is one of my favorites of your prompt responses! It is so succinct, but carries so much energy. Great exercise, and wonderfully executed! Corinna
ReplyDeleteI like it! Good job. That is a fun challenge.
ReplyDeleteLook at em go! Nice story and picture combo. And your title, you clever girl! Tee hee. Which indeed? Hmm? Both gals fit the story perfectly.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of text and image.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC challenge for wk 97 - 'FIVES'
These five line poems almost have a limerick feel to them!
ReplyDeleteI loved this one...it was so incredibly visual in so few words!
Neat writing.