tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6816015196790632629.post6599435317075194038..comments2024-01-03T02:13:54.620-07:00Comments on Living a Dream: Spending the Weekend with Carlos and BillDreaminghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02113432418609414054noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6816015196790632629.post-1444624178382853612012-06-17T20:37:06.783-06:002012-06-17T20:37:06.783-06:00How emmbarasing! I never read this description -...How emmbarasing! I never read this description - obviously! <br />Lisa explains, "the red thing is just a divider. It also added a splash of color. Plus, in the book Bill decides to put a big red heart behind the Ying-Yang symbol, so it’s a foreshadow of that."Dreaminghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02113432418609414054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6816015196790632629.post-45907790091606671962012-06-17T17:41:10.853-06:002012-06-17T17:41:10.853-06:00How exciting to be involved in such a unique proje...How exciting to be involved in such a unique project! But I do see a couple editing issues you might have missed:<br /><br />1)Richard Cooper appears the answer to their business problems. <br />~Shouldn't this be: Richard Cooper appears to be the answer to their business problems"??<br /><br />2)Bill realizes just what she means to him and must made a decision;<br />~Shouldn't it be 'make' instead of 'made'??<br /><br />3)come clean about their past and risk her anger, or step away and allow Richard to have a romantic relationship<br />~shouldn't it be" 'step away to allow Richard to have a romantic relationship'<br /> <br />And one final thing I noticed. What is that round red thing between the white and black horse images? Does it have a purpose?<br /><br /><br />~LisaLaughing Orca Ranchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03562627840013868980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6816015196790632629.post-20238234823411778352012-06-17T10:59:18.700-06:002012-06-17T10:59:18.700-06:00Thank, Dreaming. I'm glad you enjoyed the read...Thank, Dreaming. I'm glad you enjoyed the read and you will be back on the "Beta" reader list for book two!Lisa Deonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10619574582795102959noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6816015196790632629.post-24116093547310928462012-06-17T08:16:08.869-06:002012-06-17T08:16:08.869-06:00I am going to have to read this book! The book I a...I am going to have to read this book! The book I am reading now I am less than impressed with, despite all the hype. How cool that you got to read and edit before it came out!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02168070368360018750noreply@blogger.com